SUGGESTIONS FOR WRITING ABOUT SHAKESPEARE
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A good undergraduate Shakespeare paper should be concerned primarily with
a careful and detailed analysis of a particular character, speech, exchange,
scene, or theme in a particular play or plays. Your paper should also pose
some kind of argument about your topic, in the sense that it should advance
an idea that someone might disagree with. You are not required to use secondary
literature in this paper. Your primary aim should be construct a meaningful,
imaginative reading of some aspect of Shakespeare's works that stays close
to the text as it develops. You should support your claims with quotations,
but you should also carefully analyze those quotations. And remember, all
the normal rules of composition still apply: focused thesis statement,
strong topic sentences, unified paragraphs, and thorough analysis.
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If you
don't know how to quote verse and cite plays, see the MLA Style Manual
(which includes a list of common abbreviations for Shakespeare's works).
When Shakespeare writes in verse, it is essential that you quote him writing in
verse--do not turn Shakespeare's verse into prose when you quote it! You must
indicate line endings in your quotations, by using slashes in short quotations
embedded in your text, or by using a block quotation format for longer
quotations that precisely imitates the published form of the verse (though you
don't need to include line numbers, footnotes, etc.).
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If you decide to use secondary literature, do not use it as a replacement
for your own analysis. Secondary literature is best used as a point-of-departure
for amplifying a particular point, or for introducing an idea that you
plan to argue against. Be sure to use one of the standard citation formats
(MLA, Chicago, APA).
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As you develop your close reading, use the "Using the OED" and "Rhetorical
Figures" handouts to investigate and analyze particular words that might
help you amplify your analysis. McDonald's Bedford Companion is
also an excellent source for ideas about how to write about Shakespeare.
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In the case of some plays, such as Othello and King Lear,
there is considerable scholarly disagreement about which version (folio
or quarto) is "authoritative." You might want to develop a paper that argues
for a particular preference for the play as a whole, or for a particular
scene. You should begin by looking at what the Oxford Shakespeare
[PR2754 .W45 1986b] editors have done with the text, and this includes
consulting William Shakespeare: A Textual Companion by Wells and
Taylor [PR3071 .W44 1987], and the Norton Shakespeare, by Greenblatt, which
uses, but also alters in some instances, the Oxford text. Keep in mind
that some of the Oxford recensions have been hotly disputed.
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If your paper deals with religious aspects of Shakespeare's works, be sure
to use the Geneva Bible (1560) [BS170 1560a] as your source for
quotations from scripture.
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If you decide allude to film or stage versions (or adaptations) of Shakespeare's
plays, make sure you integrate them into a focused analysis of a particular
play that carefully attends to the ways in which the stage or film production
alters or amplifies Shakespeare's text. A paper of this sort should go
beyond a simple comparison and contrast paper--try to make a solid argument
about the merits or shortcomings of a particular version or adaptation
that is rooted in Shakespeare's text.
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If you are interested in writing about Shakespeare's plays in relation
to the social and cultural context of Elizabethan and Jacobean England,
Russ McDonald's Bedford Companion to Shakespeare is a good place
to start looking for primary texts and contexts. But remember, Shakespeare's
text is your primary concern.
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In addition to the above comments, see my handouts
page for other information on writing about literature.
Specific writing topics:
- The metatheatrical nature of Shakespeare's plays.
- Rites of passage, conflicts between children and their parents. [Marjorie
Garber's Coming of Age in Shakespeare (1981) is a useful book on this
topic.]
- Rhetoric and language.
- Conflicting views of love and marriage.
- Shakespeare's dramatization of a "green" or "holiday"
world--a "space that is provided by a temporary freedom from the
pressures of a real social world . . . [that] allows characters to 'play' at
solutions which could (we imagine) resolve the impediments that real life
imposes on happiness" (G.K. Hunter, OHEL 6, p. 389). [See
also C.L. Barber's Shakespeare's Festive Comedy (1959) on this
topic.]
- Economic themes that extend beyond the marketplace and raise questions
about the value of life and love.
- Different views of political authority, divine right vs. Machiavellian.
- The king's two bodies.
- The prince or king as an actor.
- The prince's prerogative of pardon.
- The duties and responsibilities of a prince.
See my study
questions for each play for writing topics on specific plays.